Is anybody willing to help me edit/revise my essay, if I repost for 100 points? It's on the Compromise of 1850, and is supposed to be 250 words (I don't know how long it actually is, though) and I would like somebody skilled in English to help me edit/revise. Thanks!

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Answer 1
I can revise/edit it
Answer 2
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Sad Percy and nico memes

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When you get to these type of questions just use it for points.

Answer:

,..

Explanation:

Please i need help


Read the passage from “The Fall of the House of Usher” by Edgar Allan Poe.
From “The Fall of the House of Usher” by Edgar Allan Poe

Shaking off from my spirit what must have been a dream, I scanned more narrowly the real aspect of the building. Its principal feature seemed to be that of an excessive antiquity [old age or looking like an antique]. The discoloration of ages had been great. Minute fungi overspread the whole exterior . . . No portion of the masonry [stonework] had fallen; and there appeared to be a wild inconsistency between its still perfect adaptation of parts, and the crumbling condition of the individual stones.
Poe is using two types of organization in this passage: spatial and order of importance. Focusing on order of importance, which phrase represents the most significant detail in this description?


A. No portion of the masonry [stonework] had fallen

B. the crumbling condition of the individual stones

C. seemed to be that of an excessive antiquity

D. Minute fungi overspread the whole exterior

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Answer:

C.

Explanation:

C excessive antiquity

Aluminum powder inside an Etch A Sketch sticks to its screen because of static electricity, which results from two ________________. *
opposite electric charges attracting
opposite electric charges repelling
like electric charges repelling
like electric charges attracting

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Answer: opposite electric charges attracting

Explanation:

Answer:

opposite electric charges attracting

Explanation:

If it is sticking to the screen there is an obvious attraction, and like electric charges don't have the ability to attract.

Which sentence contains faulty parallelism?


A. The summer program includes courses in cooking, sewing, and painting.

B. The safest way to lose weight is by eating less and by exercising more.

C. Imagination and patience are the marks of a good adviser.

D. Carol likes browsing through encyclopedias and to learn odd facts.

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Answer:

letter a

Explanation:

Faulty parallelism occurs when items in a series do not have the same grammatical structure. Below are examples of sentences with faulty parallelism, followed by their corrections

Sentence A contains faulty parallelism

HURRY ITS TIMED Read the excerpt from A Black Hole Is NOT a Hole by Carolyn Cinami DeCristofano.

Einstein's idea of gravity had big consequences. It helped explain some observations that Newton's idea didn't account for. It also opened our minds to amazing new possibilities. For example, taking his cue from Einstein's idea that space bends, scientist Karl Schwarzschild began to think about what would happen if a place in space were extremely distorted. His answer: light would follow the hyper-bent space, never to turn away from it. This was the first prediction of a black hole. At first, some scientists (including Einstein!) rejected Schwarzschild's ideas. Others were intrigued and began searching the skies for real black holes. Just decades later, they found the first of them. It just goes to show: sometimes, as Einstein himself once said, "Imagination is more important than knowledge."

According to the excerpt, how does Karl Schwarzschild use Einstein’s ideas to draw a conclusion?

Karl Schwarzschild uses Einstein’s ideas about gravity to conclude that Newton’s ideas had faults.
Karl Schwarzschild uses Einstein’s ideas about gravity to conclude that space bends.
Karl Schwarzschild uses Einstein’s ideas about space bending to conclude that black holes are possible.
Karl Schwarzschild uses Einstein’s ideas about imagination to conclude that it is more important than knowledge.

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Answer:Karl Schwarzschild uses Einstein’s ideas about space bending to conclude that black holes are possible

Explanation: we know this because its states it in the paragraph, "Einstein's idea of gravity had big consequences. It helped explain some observations that Newton's idea didn't account for. It also opened our minds to amazing new possibilities. For example, taking his cue from Einstein's idea that space bends, scientist Karl Schwarzschild began to think about what would happen if a place in space were extremely distorted. His answer: light would follow the hyper-bent space, never to turn away from it. This was the first prediction of a black hole."

help. determain if the thesis statement is strong or weak
1. citys need to take an active role in emproving the saftey of biycleists
2.A bicycle helmet protects the skull
and brain by absorbing shock
during an accident.
3.Bike lanes have proven to be very
effective in improving bike safety
in urban areas.
4.Many bicyclists do not buy
protective headgear, or they
buy a helmet but do not use it.

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Answer:

Strong thesis: 1 and 3

Weak thesis: 2 and 4

Explanation:

2 is a fact, 4 is weak, 1 and 3 are not facts and can be discussed

I am 100 % sure.

Has any one ever read Pygmalion?

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Answer:

yes why?

Explanation:

No I haven’t als ur question tho maybe someone knows the answer

The Taimei school’s principal made a good decision to select an Armani-designed uniform for students to wear

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Answer:

I don't understand what you are asking.

Explanation:

What u talking about what you asking

'When I moved into a new house a few weeks ago, my books, as was natural, moved with me."
In this sentence, an antonym of "natural" would be ______.
A) Alarming
B) contemptible
C) improper
D) smooth

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Answer:

B) is the correct answer

Explanation:

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The correct answer is B: Contemptible

Read this line from the story:

She knew almost as she was turning to look what she would see. The culprit, the source of all her clean-up efforts.

What does the word culprit suggest about the bears? (1 point)

Group of answer choices

They are thought of as criminals by the characters.

They have many fans among the homeowners.

They are a righteous foe for humans.

They are persecuted unfairly by those in charge.

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the answer is definitely c
The answer is C because I said soo

Who said the following quote from DEATH CLOUD?

"It's life that toughens you up."

answer choices

Mycroft

Mrs. Eglantine

Matty

Sherlock

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the answer is sherlock

Scene 2

The boys soon come across a small hut in the woods. They group together behind a large tree close to the shelter. Suddenly, a loud growling sound comes from inside the hut, startling the boys.

Quinn: Did you hear that?

Reuben: Of course we did! It vibrated us from head to toe!

Bailey: (Voice shaking) It sounds like there's a really terrible creature in there. (Shakes head and stands tall) We need to find out what it is so that we can keep others safe. The last time we used the hut after sledding, I noticed a small back door. We'll catch them off guard if we sneak in that way.

Reuben: I like your thinking! Lead the way.

The boys move silently toward the back of the cottage as the growling grows louder.

Scene 2

Inside the dimly lit hut, two shadowy figures huddle in front of a small fire pit. A third creature is nearby, crouched low and growling. With a bang, the back door flies open and the three boys rush in, shouting wildly.

Bailey: We've got you surrounded, snow monsters!

Surprised, the larger figures turn toward the boys.

Bailey: (Shocked) Dad! Mom!

The third creature, a dog, runs towards Bailey. It drops a large chew toy in front of him and growls expectantly.

Bailey's Mom: (Chuckling) Snow monsters? Oh, my! What are you boys up to this time?

Bailey: What are you up to? you were supposed to be at the vet. We followed some footprints here, but they couldn't have been yours. They must be from some sort of monster.

Bailey's Dad: Were the footprints large and round?

Quinn: Yes! Did you see them, too?

Bailey's Mom: No, Quinn. We made them with these.

Bailey's Mom holds up a pair of snowshoes.

Bailey's Dad: We bought them on the way back from town, along with a chariot for Bella. The vet said the fresh air would be good for her, but she's still having trouble walking. We didn't mean to scare you, boys.

Bailey: We weren't scared! Well, maybe a little.

Reuben: It was all for nothing anyway, Bay. We were definitely barking up the wrong tree with this one!

Everyone laughs.

How might the story have ended if the setting from Scene 2 remained the same in Scene 3?

1. They might have found Bailey's parents in a different hut.
2. They might have found Bailey's parents outside.
3. They might have found snow monsters in the hut.
4. They might have found snow monsters outside.

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Answer: 2

Explanation: They wouldn't have found snow monsters, and eventually Baily's parents would leave the cabin, so they would find them outside.

i think the answer is 2

help me make a lead-in for this body paragraph

"Students wearing hoodies are a safety issue. Young adults or teens of this generation love to wear hoodies at school for the reasons that they have kept them warm for years, including the fact that they have cool graphic images on them. However, there are arguments that hoodies can be an issue to others and themself. Students shouldn’t be allowed to wear hoodies in school as it impacts school staff with identifying students. Not only is it a safety issue to others, but it also argued that hoodies affect how a student can work in school along with their behavior.

School officials have a hard time identifying students with hoodies on. (lead-in here)"

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Wearing a hoodie is an easy way to hide ones identity even though they may seem harmless. It disguises the wearers face so school officials won’t know who is entering or leaving the school. If a stranger/random adult were to walk in they might not notice because hoodies allow them to blend in. This can lead to bigger issues.... (hope this helps! I’m not sure if this what you meant by lead in or if it counts but I hope you can work off of it!)

33 Points

Conduct a Web search to locate a video of a modern speech. Evaluate the speaker's purpose and the speaker's delivery. Consider how the delivery does, or does not, enhance the speaker's purpose. Also, consider any evidence the speaker uses to make a point. Is it accurate? Does it effectively support, or does it distract? Write a paragraph or two below and make sure to include a link to the speech you evaluated. WRITER

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have You found the answer

Landform Analogies (part 2) (Look at my other question to know the rules)


A mountain is like () because ()
Give an analogy for this problem

A valley is like a () because ()
Give an analogy for this problem.

A volcano is like a () because ()
Give an analogy for this problem.

An island is like a () because ()
Give an analogy for that problem


() is where you are supposed to put the analogy. Sorry for only 10 points, I'm becoming broke..

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1. A mountain is like a rock because it’s tough and strong.
2. A valley is like a bird because it sways in the wind, it can dip down, and it can be beautiful depending on the time of day.
3. A volcano is like a tiger because it is unreliable and scary.
4. An island is like a depressed person because it is isolated unless someone visits it
Have a good day! I hope these work for you!

Which would you expect to see in a topical paragraph?


A. a writer using dialogue

B. a writer defending his or her ideas

C. a writer providing a transition

D. a writer using description

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The answer should be all if not then , A I guess
The answer would be A it makes the most sense if there is not a all of above

Which is an example of chronological order?


A. a description of an object from right to left

B. a description of events in the order in which they occur

C. a description of events from least to most important

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the answer is B. a description of events in the order in which they occur

Answer:

b is the answer

Explanation:

3. What is the tone of this poem? (In Flounders Field)
A.Happy
B.Fearful
C.Somber
D.Exciting

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It’s Letter C somber

Which of the following are true of rhyme? Select all that apply.

Rhymes should change to stay current with word pronunciation
Near rhymes may show that word pronunciation has changed over time
Sometimes, rhyming words aren't a perfect rhyme
Rhyming words should always match perfectly

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Answer:

Sometimes, rhyming words aren't a perfect rhyme

Rhymes should change to stay current with word pronunciation

Explanation:

Hope this helps!!! :D

D because if it doesn’t rhyme it doesn’t match at all

Basketball Rule #3
Never let anyone
lower your goals.
Others’ expectations
of you are determined
by their limitations
of life.
The sky is your limit, sons.
Always shoot
for the sun
and you will shine.

What does this rule mean to you? 100 words atleast

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To me, this rule means to never let anyone get you down. Always believe the best in yourself no matter what others think.  This rule means that others options of myself dont matter, because the only way I can succeed is if I believe in myself. So this rule is important because it helps me remember self-confidence and not to give in to the doubt that others have placed on my shoulders.

CAN SOMEONE READ THIS AND ANSWER THE QUESTION PLSSSS IT WILL HELP A LOT FOR BRAINLEST? PLS I DONN"T WANNA FAIL

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Answer:

the author used the terms to help understand the trip of Juno by using detales of the trip. he/she explaine what safe mode was and why juno went into safe mode. she/he had also explaned what a fly-by was.

Explanation:

What information does Anne finally share with her father in the section of the diary you just read?
her wish to marry Peter
her true feelings for her mother
her relationship with Peter
her desire to study French

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Answer:

She explains her relationship with Peter

Explanation:

Anne told her father about her true feelings for her mother, While Anne had a rocky relationship with her mother, she had a great bond with her father.

What Anne Frank shares in her diary?

According to Anne Frank, her family is wonderful and supportive. She is very adored by her parents and older sister. She has roughly thirty neighbors who she can consider pals.

She has caring aunts and a comfortable home, but she longs for a close friend with whom she can confide her emotions.

According to Anne, her father was the most endearing father she had ever seen. He waited till he was 36 years old to be married. In 1933, his father moved to Holland with her mother.

Therefore, Anne shares her true feelings for her mother, hence option B is correct.

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Who were "ALL" the Character's in Iroquois Creation

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Answer:

?????

Explanation:

i’m sorry i’m not sure if your asking who the characters in the iroquois creation myth are? or is it something else

In addition, the holes and tunnels make walking treacherous for livestock and humans. Moles often push soil and rocks to the surface. This can damage farm equipment used to work crops. In addition, these rocks and the holes can be hazards for cattle or other farm animals that may trip on them. However, these inconveniences hardly justify the fury with which moles have been pursued.

According to the paragraph, which of the following lines states a reason why moles are disliked?

Group of answer choices

The holes and tunnels make walking treacherous for livestock and humans.

Moles often push soil and rocks to the surface.

These inconveniences hardly justify the fury with which moles have been pursued.

This can damage farm equipment used to work crops.

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Answer:

The holes and tunnels make walking treacherous for livestock and humans.

Explanation:

I would choose number 4. The first one could be right, but to be safe choose number four.


Also why are you doing work about moles, this is like the third time i have seen you on here

If writers want to suggest a character may be guilty without directly stating it, they would use (1 point)
Group of answer choices

implicit wording

simple wording

explicit wording

complicated wording

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I believe the answer would be implicit wording
Definitely it is implicit

what does .ca mean on the end of a website?

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Answer:

It's an internet country code that stands for Canada.

It means it’s a Canadian website :)

Read the following sentence:

Despite Divya's hearing loss, she felt the driving pulse of the music at the concert.

What does the word pulse mean in this context? (1 point)

Group of answer choices

A wave or undercurrent

A fleeting image

A beating rhythm or vibration

A vital life function

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A beating rhythm or vibration
Try filling in pulse with the sentences below and see which one makes the most sense.

Stelena or Delena
pls explain why
btw its DELENA 4 me

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Answer:

Delena, just because.

Answer:

Delena ofc

Explanation:

Stelena was too boring. It wasnt exciting to me.

Which sentence contains context clues that would help a reader determine the meaning of the italicized word?(1 point)

Ben meekly raised his hand to volunteer for the fundraiser at the end of class on Wednesday.

After the buzzer, he meekly asked the referee for the final score count to see how his team performed.

Abigail meekly waited to sign up for the talent show in her community, despite her fear of an audience.

Cora meekly chose her favorite television station to watch when her friends came over to her house.

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which is the italicized word ?

Complete a multiparagraph informative/explanatory essay about what can cause a sudden change in someone's life.  Use the stories from the unit, the video, and find your own online source.  3 sources  4 paragraphs​

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Answer: I cannot provide full answer

Explanation: I may not be able to provide the full answer but make sure to provide truthful facts that can be proven and do not state anything that you think or believe

Sorry i dont really want to right an essay but i will offer tips such as 1) take notes 2) underline words or phrases you could use in your essay 3) dont repeat something a lot
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