rewrite the sentence below to make them more concise




i received your inquiry yesterday. Yes, we do have...

Rewrite The Sentence Below To Make Them More Concise I Received Your Inquiry Yesterday. Yes, We Do Have...

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Answer 1

Answer:

Your yesterday's inquiry of our Apple brand of phones is available.

Explanation:

I have been able to rewrite the given sentence in order to make it more concise.

From my concise sentence, it can be deduced that:

i. an inquiry was made yesterday

ii. the specific inquiry that was made was stated without leaving anyone in the dark.

iii. what is been inquired is available.

Concise sentences give a lot of information very clearly and they do that in  few words. Such sentences are very brief yet easy to be understood.


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2. PART B: Which detail from the text best supports the

answer to Part A?

Commonlit daughter of invention

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Answer:

The details from the text that best supports the answer to Part A.

"When I was done, I read over my words, and my eyes filled. I finally sounded like myself in English!"

"What we ended up doing that night was putting together a speech at the last moment. Two brief pages of stale  compliments and the polite commonplaces on teachers, wrought by necessity without much invention by mother for  daughter late into the night in the basement on the pad of paper and with the same pencil she had once used for her  own inventions, for I was too upset to compose the speech myself."

NOTE: I am answering this question to the best of my knowledge since adequate information were not given for the question.

Explanation:

Part A question:

Which TWO statements describe the main themes of the story?

Part A answers:

Creativity and creation can bring great joy.

If you’re going to be an inventor or creator, it’s important to not be afraid to take risks.

Looking at the answers from Part A, you will discover that the details I stated in my answer support the themes as stated in the Part A answers.

In the story, the narrator revealed that she started writing recklessly and when she done, her eyes were filled. That should be tears of joy and satisfaction. She was proud of herself.

If one will be an inventor or creator, such one must be ready and not afraid to take risks. We discover that the narrator, despite the father's attitude towards her, she took the risk of still writing with the help of her mother.

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engineers, one would need to pass the
recommendations
Reset
Next
certifications
portfolio

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Answer:

The recommendation are passed to other when the opinion is asked about certain situation. The reset is an option to clear the work and bring the application to the default situation.

Explanation:

Next option is used in the move forward situation when certain situation are not solved and the solution is skipped for a while. Certifications include confirming the answers when the problem is solved. Portfolio is a group of queries from clients which are solved instantly.

name one exsample of poetry PLEASE

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Popular poetry types include haiku, free verse, sonnets, and acrostic poems

Answer: Dramatic poetry encompasses a highly emotional story that's written in verse and meant to recite. It usually tells a story or refers to a specific situation. So this would include closet drama, dramatic monologues, and rhyme verse.

Explanation:

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you have been assigned to compose an essay about the history of the legend of bigfoot. given that you are asked to maintain a formal tone, which of these sentences would NOT make an appropriate choice for inclusion in this essay

A. I saw a bigfoot, and oh man, I was scared!
B. Bigfoot is reputed to be a type of animal that hasn't yet been categorized
C. There are great many stories about people supposedly meeting up with Bigfoot
D. some believe that bigfoot sightings are just cases of people being mistaken about what they saw.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

the sentence is not formal and it shows to much emotion

If you could start an organization to help a cause or community in need, what issue would it address and why?

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Answer:

there won't be any issue if you know what you are doing in the organization

Explanation:

Does "for instance" belongs in your topic sentence

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No it doesn’t because it doesn’t really make sense

Write an essay about your corona experience (400 words)

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Answer:

I'm now at home every day and it really is affecting me socially. Not being able to speak to friends and see people I see on a regular basis is hard for me. Also, now that school is closed for the rest of the year it has really had an effect on my school life. I am not used to being at home all the time and working on the computer. I'm usually in a classroom surrounded by my peers. However, I am human so I will learn to adapt, but for now it is hard. It has affected me personally in the social and educational aspect, but I know around the city of Detroit it's affecting others as well. In Detroit, which is one of the cities around the country hit hard by the virus, the pandemic has also affected the youth. Youth are now forced to stay home instead of going to school and spending time with friends. Most kids need to be outside and with people to release their energy and socialize. Now this cannot happen, because the virus has affected us so much. One thing we also see happening is food insecurities and social distancing. Due to what is happening in the world, people are very much afraid and cautious about food supply and interactions with people. People are afraid and are told to stay inside, so we stock up supplies that will last them about a month. Usually people get stuff that we will last them about two weeks, but now we need to stay home as much as we can.With social distancing, we now separate ourselves from other parts of society. This has made me feel very much disconnected from my friends. Humans are made to be out and about and socialize with beings on Earth. These unfortunate events have led many people to be disconnected from society. This has allowed my mind to go to the dark side, where my fears come out. My main fear is “How long will my life be on pause?” I’m afraid of how long I will be stuck in the house and can’t see my friends. Will it be a couple more weeks or will it be a couple months?

p.s this is random but i still agree with this essay

Explanation:

Corona has kept me at home more than I would have liked to. Naturally, I am a stay-at-home type of person, but plenty of times throughout the year I have wanted to go out in the city and hang out with friends and family. I know that I can't do these things though because it puts their safety, and mine, at risk of exposure. I've come to terms with this reality and it doesn't bother me as much anymore.
One difficult thing though is virtual learning. At first, I thought not being able to go to school would be a positive thing. Little did I know, virtual learning only made things slightly worse. Teachers are not being very lenient with students as they want students to be with them. I've failed classes worse than ever, lost touch with friends, but on the flip side, my mental health has never been better. School has been one of the reasons my mental health suffered throughout the past 4-5 years. It made me realize a lot about myself, as all I can do at home is watch Netflix or be alone with my thoughts.
In light of Corona, it has shown how people in my country, America, have taken the culture of individualism to an extreme. No one has a sense of community or “helping out the neighbor”. If it doesn't affect you and your loved ones, apparently no one else cares. People won't listen to simple orders of staying at home unless absolutely necessary and to wear a mask if you do go out. Wearing a mask protects people from you, so that you don't spread bodily fluids like saliva, which Corona spreads through, not the other way around.
In conclusion, it's been one long ride with Corona. With vaccines planning to be distributed amongst the world and places like school starting to open back up, let's see what 2021 has in store for us.

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REWRITE THE FOLLOWING STARTING SENTENCE AS INDICATED WITHOUT CHANGING THE
MEANING
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Some nice musicals are written by Cole Porter.
Cole Porter ……………………

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Answer:

“Night and Day,” “I Get a Kick Out of You,” “Begin the Beguine,” “I've Got You Under My Skin,” “In the Still of the Night,” “Just One of Those Things,” “Love for Sale,” “My Heart Belongs to Daddy,” “Too Darn Hot,” “It's Delovely,” “I Concentrate on You,”

Explanation:

these are some nice musics pls brainlish and heart

Night and day
I hope it help

The Golden Mare the firebird and the magic ring

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Answer:

What are we supposed to answer i dont really get it

Explanation:

the answer is the magic ring

According to Kevin, if you don't read, you can't

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Answer:quit

Explanation:

Cesar Chavez experienced a lot growing up. Which events do you think
were most influential in his life and inspired him to accomplish what he
did?

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Is there a choices?
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Warm-Up
Think of the novels and short stories you’ve read in the past. Make a list of ways an author adds excitement or importance to a story. What qualities make a story engaging for you as a reader?

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Well, I know that too formal of a writing style can confuse me, so I prefer a more casual tone to the story. I want to read a story and have it keep me on the edge of my seat, and excite me throughout the whole experience. Books to me do not always have to include a moral, or a lesson to them. Reading to me is a source of entertainment. For example, the novel I read in 4th grade, Gregor and the Curse of the Warmbloods, was so original and odd, yet thrilling and exciting. I like when a story gets to the action considerably quickly. I usually give up on a story if it takes too long to build up.

I hope this helps in some way, or at least inspires you. Have a great day!

Unlike his mother who showed great forbearance the boy in the Christmas carol often lost his what?

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Face because he was ugly hehehegehe

2 ways that someone can create effect.

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Answer:

shorter sentences for tension?

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In addition to looking at the formal elements in a literary text, writers might also look at (Choose all that apply):

a.
the education of the author

b.
the philosophies that the work addresses

c.
the work's cultural context

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Answer:

B. the philosophies that the work addresses

C. the work's cultural context

Explanation:

A writer is concerned with the formal elements in a literary text because it enables him to see the formalities.

Also, he is interested in the philosophies that the literary work addresses and the cultural context of the work.

why is cloning embryonic stem cells a holy grail for scientist?

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Answer:

So for years, scientists have been trying to use cloning techniques to make embryonic stem cells that are essentially a genetic match for patients. The idea is that such a close match would prevent their bodies from rejecting the cells. "It's been a holy grail that we've been after for years,"

Explanation:

9) Rewrite the following sentences using naving or being wnichever is appropriate. (5
a) I loathe people criticizing me.
b) I love people bringing ny breakfast to me in bed.
c) I like people admiring my clothes
d) I love people criticizing my enemies.
e) i love people taking me to the expensive restaurant.

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Answer:

Rewrite the following sentences using 'having' or 'being', whichever is appropriate.

a) I loathe people criticizing me.  ⇒ I loathe being criticized by people.

b) I love people bringing my breakfast to me in bed.  ⇒ I love having my breakfast brought to me in bed by people.

c) I like people admiring my clothes  ⇒ I love having my clothes admired by people.

d) I love people criticizing my enemies.  ⇒ I love my enemies being criticized by people.

e) I love people taking me to the expensive restaurant. ⇒ I love being taken to expensive restaurants by people.

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Explanation:

Peter was tired when he arrived home because he caught up at dawn and he was driving for 10 hours

I want to get my car but it wasn't there when I park my car on a Yellow line it was towed away

Mick was a homeless beggar because he wasn't all this work he had a successful business but it went bust

last week John move to the house which he first soft while he was driving on holiday in Scotland jean and Peter arrived home when when they have hawked all the day and

1.) Peter was tired when he arrived home because he had gotten up at dawn and had driven for ten hours.

2.) I went to get my car but it wasn’t there because when I parked earlier I was on a yellow line and it ended up getting towed away.

3.) Mick was a homeless beggar, but he wasn’t always poor because he used to have a successful business, which unfortunately turned out to be a bust.

4.) Jane and Peter arrived home after shopping all day, they had spent all their money on clothes and now they were broke.

5.) Last week john moved to the house he had seen while driving on holiday in Scotland.

is there any personification in this stanza? if so, what is it?

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Answer:

Maybe?

Explanation:

If it is referring to the wind when it says "And chased us south along" then yes because it shows the wind is doing something humanly.

yes chased it’s saying that the wind can do something that humans can done

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!!!!!!! In The True Confessions Of Charlotte Doyle Book !!!!!!!!!

Imagine that you could give one character in the novel advice to help him or her in the story. Whom would you choose, what would you tell him or her, and why? In a short journal entry of about 150 words, and using details from the novel, describe your advice and explain how it would help the character.

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Answer:

her in story because girls always need more help than men but men also need help what girls need more help

I figured it would help, You asked this question several times

This is what someone put:

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In The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle, changes happen to people, to places, and to things. To everything, in fact! We might conclude, then, that the novel wants us to see that change is a part of life. Some are good, some are bad, and some is ugly. The advice I would give to Charlotte Doyle might be like whatever you do, keep the dirk. You never know when you might need it. You can't trust anybody with anything. Don't wander around places you don't know. And I think Charlotte should make a decoy hiding spot, even if she says it's there it will be somewhere else. I would tell Charlotte that she needs to spend more time with Zachariah, talk about what they like, where they came from etc. Not just make assumptions stating if he was her friend or not in a day. I would tell Charlotte to not judge people by appearances. She kind of judged Captain Jaggery by the way he had his hold set up. I would tell her to go back to the brig with a candle. Obviously, people don't want her there, so there must be something worth checking out.

True or False: Mood and tone are both impacted by the
author's word choice.

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The answer is true.

Because without mood or tone a story would just sound like "Jim walked his dog. He walked it down the street." But with tone and mood the story sounds like "Jim walked Robert, Robert was his dog and they loved going on walks together. They walk down the street and around the corner."

Fall of the House of Usher, excerpt
By Edgar Allan Poe
Upon my entrance, Usher rose from a sofa on which he had been lying at full length, and greeted me with a
vivacious warmth which had much in it, I at first thought, of an overdone cordiality-of
the constrained effort of
the ennuyél man of the world. A glance, however, at his countenance convinced me of his perfect sincerity. We
sat down; and for some moments, while he spoke not, I gazed upon him with a feeling half of pity, half of awe.
Surely, man had never before so terribly altered, in so brief a period, as had Roderick Usher! It was with difficulty
that I could bring myself to admit the identity of the wan being before me with the companion of my early
boyhood. Yet the character of his face had been at all times remarkable. A cadaverousness of complexion; an
eye large, liquid, and luminous beyond comparison; lips somewhat thin and very pallid, but of a surpassingly
beautiful curve; a nose of a delicate Hebrew model, but with a breadth of nostril unusual in similar formations; a
finely moulded chin, speaking, in its want of prominence, of a want of moral energy; hair of a more than web-like
softness and tenuity; - these features, with an inordinate expansion above the regions of the temple, made up
altogether a countenance not easily to be forgotten. And now in the mere exaggeration of the prevailing
character of these features, and of the expression they were wont to convey, lay so much of change that I
doubted to whom I spoke. The now ghastly pallor of the skin, and the now miraculous lustre of the eye, above
all things startled and even awed me. The silken hair, too, had been suffered to grow all unheeded, and as, in its
wild gossamer texture, it floated rather than fell about the face, I could not, even with effort, connect its
Arabesque expression with any idea of simple humanity.
1Bored
Read this line from the text:
And now in the mere exaggeration of the prevailing character of these features, and of the expression they were
wont to convey, lay so much of change that I doubted to whom I spoke.
What does the narrator mean by I doubted to whom I spoke in this paragraph?
He has never met this person before.
O He knows this is an imposter.
O He has decided to leave.
O He thinks his friend has changed a lot.

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Answer:

O He thinks his friend has changed a lot.

Explanation:

Edgar Allen Poe's short story "The Fall of the House of Usher" revolves around the story of how the unnamed narrator had been invited to stay at his friend's home and the unnatural events that he came upon during that stay. This gothic story deals with the themes of good, madness, the supernatural, and the 'evils' that seem to penetrate through the 'house' of Usher.

As given in the passage from the story, the narrator reveals that the man who had met him on his arrival seemed so different that he barely remembered it was his friend Roderick Usher, the very same man who had invited him. So, when he said "I doubted to whom I spoke", the narrator meant that Roderick had changed so much that he even doubted if he knows the man he was talking to.

Thus, the correct answer is the fourth option.

What the narrator meant by "I doubted to whom I spoke" in this paragraph is this:  He thinks his friend has changed a lot.

In this excerpt from the passage, we see that the narrator described the features of his friend whom he had just met in depth.

He was very worried about his changed features. In fact, his friend had changed so much that he doubted if he was actually the one that he was having a conversation with.

This is the meaning of the phrase, "I doubted to whom I spoke."

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Pass the vibe check tech edition. LVL-Hard
And shorty she a diva she a diva ___

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Diva (letra) - The Kid LAROI y Lil Tecca

Explanation:

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each question and the accompanying sente verb or the object that answers the question. M 1. Which is the verb phrase? At school Andy had read about tomato plant: b d a 2. Which is the linking verb? Andy was busy in his garden. b d с​

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Answer:

1. The verb phrase is: had read

2. The linking verb is: was

Explanation:

A "verb phrase" is a combination of a "helping verb" plus a "main verb."

Helping verbs or auxiliary verbs that help the verb (main) to express its mood, tense and voice. There are three types of helping verbs and these are: To Be, To Have and To Do.

"Had" is an example of a "To Have" helping verb. It is combined with read, which is the main verb in the sentence. Therefore, the verb phrase in the first sentence is "had read."

Linking verbs are verbs that connect a subject to a predicate noun/predicate adjective. Examples of linking verbs are: am, is, are , was, were, being and been.

This clearly shows that the linking verb for the second sentence above is "was." It describes Andy as being busy.

Evaluate the scene where Della and Jim exchange gifts. What effect does this situation have on the story? Which stage of plot development would you consider this event to be in-rising action, climax, falling action, or resolution? Why?​

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Answer:

Before Della and Jim exchange gifts, the reader sees anxiety between them about the fact that Della cut her hair. When the characters exchange gifts, the reader and the characters see the situational irony of the moment. Both characters sacrificed something they deeply valued to buy something the other would value. Yet what the characters sell makes the gifts they receive useless. The exchange of the gifts is the climax because the story revolves around the purchase of these gifts and what they represent. The story is resolved when the characters realize that their presents are materially useless but symbolize the deep love they share.

This would be the climax of the story because we are anticipating the reactions of both of the lovers. The falling acting would be after this, when they accept each others sacrifice for each other and enjoy a Christmas meal together.

What is the most effective way to include a formal tone in an argumentative essay?

Provide reasons and evidence to support an argument.
Include information from well-known publications.
Balance simple sentences with complex sentences.
Include an interesting statistic or fact in the introduction.

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Answer:

Provide reasons and evidence to support an argument.

Explanation:

An argumentative essay is a type of essay that is made to state a claim, give new evidence about a claim in order to back up such claim.

One of the most effective way to include a formal tone in an argumentative essay is by providing reasons and evidence to support an argument.

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Answer:

D) Numerator.

Explanation:

When we say "subject area word", we mean any word that pertains to a particular field of study, subject or interest. It mainly refers to a particular field of knowledge that may be from the various fields of academics or anything.

Among the given words in the option, the word that is a subject-area word is "numerator" for it specifically is about mathematics. This word is used in mathematical calculations and pertains to this field of study most.

Thus, the correct answer is option D.

Use the word monastery in a sentence

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Answer:

He entered a monastery as a young man.

Explanation:

Answer:

The monastery was really big.

Explanation:

please help me! The story is Stolen party by Liliana Heker

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Answer:

um sorry god will help you

Explanation:

Repacking her bag for her trip to New York was a slow process because Sherri's stuff was strewn over every inch of the floor.

In this sentence, which word should be replaced with precise language?

Her
Stuff
Every
Trip

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Answer:

Stuff

Explanation:

Word stuff is the only one that is not explained more in the sentence.

Word stuff is in general very vague word that can mean a wide array of things, physical as well as abstract. We do not know what are the stuff that Sherri had in the room, what is she suppose to pack and what is scattered around.

We know the word her refers to Sherri, the trip refers to her going to New York, and that every refers to the inches of her room.

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