The assignment wants to analyze your editing skill, for that reason I can't edit your text, but I'll show you how to edit it.
Steps to edit the textRead the entire text aloud.Identify sentences that are unclear, or do not establish the desired statement.Identify words spelled incorrectly.Identify inconsistencies.Note the fluidity of the text.A fluid text allows for efficient reading with correct pauses. These pauses are expressed by the punctuation that must be added to the text coherently.
It is important to observe the textual structure, which is the way information is presented in the text. A text must have an organized structure with coherent information.
Active and passive voices are related to the positioning of the verb in the sentence. The active voice occurs when the subject is performing the action of the verb. The passive voice occurs when the subject is undergoing the action of the verb.
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Which is a central idea of the text?
Answer:
The central idea of the text is the main point or the big idea of a passage or something you read.
Explanation:
I feel like there was supposed to actually be like a passage or something to go along with this question so if there is can you edit the question and add the text?
But hope this helps!
Answer:
the main idea of a text or you could say the part that has the most action
Explanation:
Have you ever been exposed to injustice or seen the ramifications of things that have gone wrong and had no control over them? Do you wonder how things would be if things were different? Sometimes, someone or some people have had to make sacrifices for changes to occur. Those changes may have come through monetary means, casualties, or other ways. Is the price for progress ever too high? Why or why not?
Answer:
Find the explanation below.
Explanation:
1. Yes, I have been exposed to injustice and I have also witnessed the ramifications of things that have gone wrong as a result of it. In my country, the rulers seem to care less about their subjects, leading to a high degree of unemployment, poverty and penury, killings, and crime. Few favorable policies are ever made for the masses while the rulers amass great wealth for themselves.
2. Yes, I sometimes wonder how my country would have been a better place to live in if the rulers cared more for their citizens and made/implemented favorable policies that were in their interests. We would then have good roads, well-equipped hospitals, jobs for the citizens, and fewer crimes.
3. No, the price for progress is never too high. Protests and several other legal means of agitations have been used by the masses to state their concerns. In the process, many have died. Those who have sacrificed their lives for this cause are martyrs because they died for a good cause. Nothing good can come without a price. Such martyrs have their names in the sands of times.
How should an author effectively address opposing claims in writing? (1 point)
With opinions
with defensive claims
with a counterargument
with more facts
Answer:
With more facts
Explanation:
In your paragraph:
Identify the opposing argument.
Respond to it by discussing the reasons the argument is incomplete, weak, unsound, or illogical.
Provide examples or evidence to show why the opposing argument is unsound, or provide explanations of how the opposing argument is incomplete or illogical.
Sonia sat down in the guidance counselor's office, ready to explain her
future. She was going to be a writer, she announced. All she had to do
was finish high school, go to college, and then get a job of some kind
something that would give her a source of income. Then, she
continued, on the weekends, except for those weekends when she had
soccer practice (because there was no chance she was giving that up),
and as long as her friends didn't invite her to go out partying, she
would write the great American novel. As Sonia finished triumphantly
and looked up for approval, the guidance counselor frowned.
Which statement best explains how the plot of the story helps develop the
main character?
Answer:
She was going to be a writer, she announced.
Explanation:
Directions: Select the correct location on the image.
The author wants to insert the following sentence into the passage.
After the transformation, the bicycle seemed different and incomplete to me!
Where is the best place to insert the sentence?
I still remember the day I finally managed to ride a bicycle
on my own. I was about seven years old when my best
friend Graham told me that it was high time I started riding
the bicycle without the training wheels. At that time, I
thought it was a great idea. After all, I was the best kite
runner among my friends and could climb a tree faster than
anyone. So, riding a bicycle would not be such a difficult
task. With the help of my dad, Graham and I took the
training wheels off the bicycle. Now that the moment
had finally arrived, I could feel the butterflies in my
stomach. My legs were shaking, and my hands were sweaty
I gripped the handlebars tightly and stood calmly, ready to
start. Graham held onto the bicycle, and slowly, I started to
paddle. I gradually picked up speed, feeling confident,
because I knew Graham was right behind me, helping me
keep my balance. After some time, looking from the corner
of my eye I realized that Graham had just let go of the
bicycle. Initially, I lost balance for a few seconds, but
after a few encouraging words from Graham, I regained my
confidence. Feeling proud and happy, I rode toward Graham
who was patiently waiting with a big smile on his face.
Answer:
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Answer:
to entertain the reader with humorous ideas related to bike riding
to instruct the reader about how to get on a bike
to inform the reader about the process of learning to ride a bike
Explanation:
plato users ;)
Okay quick questions!
Who’s read “the giver” before?
Answer:
I have.
Explanation:
It's really good
Answer:
if you are asking who write it then it's Lois Lowry
What is Percy Jackson's roman name?
Percy Jackson's roman name is Perseus.
Answer: Percy's roman name is Perseus
Explanation: it says what his roman name is in chapter 8 i think. I hope this helps
A.What do you do in your spare time?
b.write 3 sentence about your pastime
(Riddle) What is important and significant to you? But absolute nothing to everyone else? First response will get 30pts and a "Brainier" regardless. Any answers afterwards will be appreciated and for fun. :)
Answer:
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Explanation:
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Think of a school trip that you have been on. Choose three aspects of the trip and consider their positive points, negative points and what changes you would recommend. Then write your report. Make sure you give the purpose of the report in the introduction and conclude by saying how successful you think the trip was overall.
Answer:
The school trip chosen was the trip to visit a grape field.
Explanation:
School trips are very useful and appreciated by me, because it allows students to have access to another environment and allows everyone to learn something that is being seen in practice, which makes learning more special. The trip that my biology class made to a grape field, fulfilled this objective and therefore it must be reported.
The farm was very beautiful and had a very pleasant smell, which made the class very special, relaxed and even relaxed. At the time, we can learn some concepts relevant to agriculture, such as how fertilization, planting, seed development, the calculation of necessary water, the climate and the entire installation needed for this crop to be productive were made. In addition to the biological concepts, we had access to the economic concepts of this practice, which clarified many things for us. Nevertheless, we also had contact with the concepts of harvesting, processing, storage, shipping and sale, which made the class complete and rich in information.
I do not believe that this trip had relevant negative points and that it prevented it from being a promising and efficient class, if I have to mention some negative point, the distance between our school and the farm that was very big and left the trip very tiring.
Write a short story, no more than two A4 pages, from the perspective of a 1,000-year-old person. What have they seen over their long life? How do they feel about the world now?
Answer:
I have lived 1.000 years, today is my birthday. I have seen all my relatives born and die many times, they are not like me. I am not sure I want to live any more. I think I had enough. I have seen the appearence of television, radio and the Internet. I have seen how the Internert changed trhough the years. Many years ago we thought it was impossible to receive food through our computers. We never thought our cars could fly like we used to imagine in cartoons and movies. I, personally, never thought when I was around a hundred years old that I could talk to someone just by saying it out loud, without any device.
However, as I said before, I do not want to live anymore. Life has become too technological. We used to aspire being as technological as we could, but now I am not sure it is the best thing. I do not have interactions with humans like I used to, I only communicate with some friends I have made along the way through technology. I miss human interaction. I think I have seen it all and now it is time for me to remember everything I have lived once more and... finally die.
Explanation:
To complete this exercise, you have to write a short story from the perspective of a 1.000 years old person. I wrote about a person that decides it's time to die because he had lived too much, and he explains some of the things he saw through his life and how technology changed it all.
O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done;
The ship has weather'd every rack, the prize we sought is won;
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring:
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
Rise up for you the flag is flung-for you the bugle trills;
For you bouquets and ribbon'd wreaths-for you the shores a-crowding;
For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
Here Captain! dear father!
This arm beneath your head;
It is some dream that on the deck,
You've fallen cold and dead.
My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still;
My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will;
The ship is anchor'd safe and sound, its voyage closed and done;
From fearful trip, the victor ship, comes in with object won;
Exult, O shores, and ring, O bells!
But I, with mournful tread,
Walk the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
In one paragraph of at least three to five sentences, analyze the imagery in the stanza in
bold. Identify the mood the author intended to create with this imagery, as well as the
connotations used in the diction. Use proper spelling and grammar. (10 points)
The author intended to create a bittersweet mood. Though the overseas trip has ended, and there is a happy crowd waiting for the ship to dock, the captain, who is the narrator's father, is dead. The vocabulary and phrases used, like exulting, the prize we sought is won, eager faces, etc, describe happiness. But phrases like cold and dead, pale and still, and mournful tread, describe death, making the poem's mood bittersweet.
Which story premise is the best example of Gothic literature?
A. One by one, people in Jamal's life disappear. His friends claim to
have never known them.
B. A private investigator looks into a series of so-called miracles,
which turn out to be real.
C. Three high school friends decide to design the scariest haunted
house they can for Halloween.
D. A witch and a werewolf team up to fight vampires on a space
station near a moon of Jupiter.
Answer:
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In Act V, Scene I, Lady Macbeth feels most guilty about two murders; the murder of King Duncan and the murder of Lady Macduff and her children.
TRUE or FALSE?
Read the resolution. Which statement best conveys a negative position on the resolution? Educational institutions should use a 12-month school year. O A 12-month school year structure is not a good schedule for schools. O Administrators are unsure if using a 12-month school year would be the best idea. O Educational institutions that use a 12-month school year show marked increases in student achievement and learning. O Administrators will not use a traditional school year schedule, since a 12-month school year has the same effect on student learning.
Answer:
A 12-month school year structure is not a good schedule for schools.
Explanation:
The resolution is not given, but based on knowledge of negative positions of articles or sentences, the best answer is option B.
This is because the other options do not clearly state that they were opposing any idea and option B clearly shows that it opposed the idea of 12-month schedule for schools.
Which of the following is the best definition of an opinion?
a. Information that cannot be proven true or false. c. Something that is not researched,
b. Information that is incorrect.
d. An argument.
Answer:
A
Explanation:
Dogs are cute. You can't prove that it's true, (I wish) but you can't prove that it's false either.
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If you had to create your own society, what kind of work would your people engage in? Please answer with 1 paragraph and make sure to explain WHY.
Answer:
Own society
Explanation:
(This is just an example, feel free to edit :))
If I were to create my own society, I would assign a democracy. This way, the country would be relativly progressive compared to most countries. Citizens would participate in voting rights and wrongs. Of course, like any place, we would have flaws. However, through this democracy, people would be able to change it for the better. (sorry for spelling errors, I can't spell for the life of me lol)
Answer:
My own society
Explanation:
If I had to create my own society, everyone would be able to work wherever they want because it would be a fair choice. No one would be forced into any job.
Use context clues to define the word in italics.
During the 1970s, the United States faced a gasoline shortage. Prices increased while people waited in lines to fill their cars.
What does the word shortage mean?
A.
running out of room
B.
resourceful
C.
sufficient
D.
lack of a supply
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How did protest demonstrations aid the Civil Rights Movement?
Answer:
Protest demonstrations were a peaceful way for people to express their views about equality and justice. Many leaders of the Civil Rights Movement believed in nonviolent demonstrations of their beliefs.
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32/? = 20/25
A. 37
B. 16
C. 26
D. 40
Answer:
A
Explanation:
Just had this question for homework.
After watching Max trudge to school, Feld decided that Max was a. Clumsy and awkward. B. Tall and homely. C. Wealthy and sophisticated. D. Diligent and responsible.
Answer:
a. Clumsy and Awkward
Read the following poem by John Keats. What type of poem is it?
Bright star! would I were steadfast as thou art—
Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night,
And watching, with eternal lids apart,
Like Nature's patient, sleepless Eremite,
The moving waters at their priest-like task
Of pure ablution round earth's human shores,
Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors—
No—yet still steadfast, still unchangeable,
Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,[xxii]
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender taken breath,
And so live ever—or else swoon to death.
A.
haiku
B.
ballad
C.
ode
D.
sonnet
E.
elegy
Answer:
sonnet
Explanation:
this poem has 14 lines and a sonnet poem consists of 14 lines as well.
Answer:
D. sonnet
Explanation:
A sonnet is a type of lyric poem that has 14 lines. In particular, this poem is a Shakespearean sonnet; it is made up of three quatrains, each with its own rhyme scheme, and followed by a rhyming couplet.
Other answers:
A. haiku
A haiku is a form of Japanese poetry made of short, unrhymed lines that evoke natural imagery. They come in a variety of different formats of short verses, though the most common is a three-line poem with a 5-7-5 syllable pattern.
B. ballad
A ballad is a type of narrative poetry that has musical, songlike qualities and is usually made up of quatrains. The second and fourth line of each quatrain rhyme.
C. ode
Odes are written using lofty or uplifting language, have a formal informal tone, and often use apostrophe.
(Not this kind of apostrophe: ' In poetry, it is a figure of speech where an absent person, an inanimate object, or an abstract concept is directly addressed.)
E. elegy
Elegies have a sad tone and are usually written to express sorrow over someone’s death. The traditional elegy has three parts:
The poem expresses sorrow over someone's death.The poem goes on to honor and praise the dead.The poem offers consolation or comfort.I hope this helps!
I just cried so hard watching "5ft apart"....does anyone know if Will dies?
Answer:
148x
Explanation:
I used math to solve this. Duh.
get depressed and some people get
essed
People over the age of forty have out-lived their use to society.
AGREE
DISAGREE
Reason
Answer:
Uhhhhhhhh... Neither!
Explanation:
What is one fact that viewers learn from the voice-over narration? a. the date and location of the documentary b. Craig's reason for making the trip c. the name of the man being interviewed d. the ages of the child laborers
Hello. You did not inform the documentary to which this question refers, which does not allow me to tell you an exact answer. However, the use of voice-over narration is constantly performed as a technique to expose a subject with the aim of generating reflection, dissemination and often appealing to the emotional side of viewers, showing an unfair or emotional situation, for example. Following this reasoning, the letter D may be the answer to your question, since working children is a reflexive situation.
Imagine u are purchasing a new car
Brainstorm - What factors will influence your decision? How were these decision arrived at?
The factors that will influence one's decision will depend on certain factors such as affordability & value, comfortability and ergonomics, performance of the car to conform to the owner's thrill-needs. These are all just ideas, the important thing is that they have to link to what the customer needs.
Answer:
I would first think about the price, and how much I would pay monthly. Then, I wouldn't just think of if I have the money now, but will I be using up all that I have? This wouldn't be wise because what if something important came up like hospital bills? I wouldn't want to do a loan. If I had the money and enough money saved for other things then I would by the car. Brand and year would be important to consider.
How does the author's use of the organizational structure support his or her purpose? A. It shows how doughnuts became more popular than bagels. B. It shows how bagels and doughnuts have their own unique histories. C. It shows the influence bagels and doughnuts had on American soldiers D. It shows the reason bagels were invented to replace doughnuts.
Answer:
The correct answer is C) It shows the influence of doughnuts on American soldiers
Explanation:
In the penultimate and last paragraphs, we see a strong connection between the doughnut and the American Soldiers as well as the office of the president of America. Barack Obama the 44th president of the USA is referenced to consider the doughnut as his best food.
In making these type of alignments, the writer is able to use the brand of a strong organization to buttress his or her point.
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Answer:
It shows how bagels and doughnuts have their own unique histories.
Explanation:
Read the introduction to this passage. The author aims to show how bagels and doughnuts are different from each other. The organization of information in this passage helps readers understand why bagels and doughnuts have their unique histories.
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How is publishing on a blog different from publishing in an online magazine or journal?
a.) Bloggers require that your writing be nearly perfect; magazines and journals don't.
b.) Bloggers often expect you to answer comments about your post.
c.) Bloggers are not as particular about what to publish as magazines and journals are.
d.) Bloggers usually do not have any editorial guidelines, but magazines and journals do.
Answer:
The answer is C
Explanation:
the other answers dont make any sense
c.) Bloggers are not as particular about what to publish as magazines and journals are.
is the answer
Publishing on a blog is different from publishing in an online magazine or journal as Bloggers are not as particular about what to publish as magazines and journals are. Thus option C is appropriate.
What are magazines?
A magazine is a type of book that contains content related to different segments it includes food recipes, traveling blogs, innovative ideas from different cultures, and the importance as well as fashion tips for experts and celebrities.
Blogs are referred to as a writing style that is mainly used to communicate with the audience for social interaction and helps in sharing information or news about different issues by giving their own point of view.
The difference between a blog and Journal is that A blog is more focused on social engagement and involves an informal tone whereas magazines have their own group of audience so it shares a formal tone.
Therefore, option C is appropriate.
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Why does Candy feel reassured by George’s comment about Curley’s wife
How can a speech’s tone support the purpose of the speech
Answer:
attitude
Explanation:
Answer:
If you speak kinda angry, people will know you are most likely trying to make a stand for something you believe is important. If you have a begging note in your voice, people will know you are pleading for something.
Explanation: